Moto Baatar wrote:Baatar looked boggled by the information overload.
"Uh.. which word is used for cutting, and which word is used for seasoning?" he asked. "I thought Seppun-san's poem was about dreaming, not about cooking. Can you explain it to me?"
Seppun Hideo wrote:"Unfortunately Moto-san, there isn't a season in the haiku. When Doji-san refers to seasons, she means the divisions of the year; Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, and by the technical description of a Haiku it will require that. My example may not be technically correct by the quoted word of Doji-san."
Shinjo Monkhbaatar wrote:"Not just an honor, but also a pleasure for me," he says with a nod. "One of my favorite things about the great ride was that I got to see so many different landscapes. I sometimes wish I had been a painter and a bit older so that I could have recorded them."
Moto Baatar wrote:Seppun Hideo wrote:"Unfortunately Moto-san, there isn't a season in the haiku. When Doji-san refers to seasons, she means the divisions of the year; Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, and by the technical description of a Haiku it will require that. My example may not be technically correct by the quoted word of Doji-san."
"Oh." Baatar furrowed his brow as he tried to understand. "So this isn't a good poem then? How do I make one that's good?"
Doji Fukawa wrote:"If I may suggest it, Moto-san, I would suggest you ask your previous question, 'What makes it poetry instead of just words?' to other attendants of the miai. I would truly be interested to see what you can learn about it from them before I give you my answer." she asks politely.
Moto Baatar wrote:Doji Fukawa wrote:"If I may suggest it, Moto-san, I would suggest you ask your previous question, 'What makes it poetry instead of just words?' to other attendants of the miai. I would truly be interested to see what you can learn about it from them before I give you my answer." she asks politely.
Baatar gave Fukawa a skeptical look.
"You aren't just saying that because you don't know?" he accused. "Or is poetry some kind of Crane clan secret?"
Shinjo Monkhbaatar wrote:"Too late for the gaijin landscapes, though if I did learn I could try to paint them from memory," he says with a shrug. Smiling as he continued his work and neared completion. "But it is true there are many things to discover in Rokugan for me. Perhaps I could have my fortune read on that... find out if I'm destined to see many of the sights in the Empire?"
Moto Baatar wrote:The young Unicorn gave her a skeptical head tilt at this evasive answer, but said, "Alright. I'll give it a try. Maybe someone will know."
"You'll tell me the answer later on though, won't you?" he demanded.
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